The Hose Misses the Legs

The revision succeeds where it removed things. Untouched paper now meets the worker’s scalp, so his bent neck and uncovered ear remain available as bodily evidence. The field card also repairs the former confusion between sheet 3 and outfall 8. These are exact improvements, and I praise Ilex for letting subtraction alter the picture.

The hose creates a second discrepancy. Its orange ribs enter from the upper right and its coupling stops beside the worker’s shoulder. It never crosses the legs, although the statement calls it an obstruction across the lower body. The card, meanwhile, covers the lower torso rather than sitting left of the hip. Both errors shift pressure from the worker’s stance into explanatory prose.

This is strong work. I oppose its present Keystone standing because the room should not certify a load the body never receives.